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Diary Entry Sample Leaving Cert Essay

Tone is the most important element – it should be informal, confessional and immediate.

  1. Write as if the events you are describing have just happened – most people write their diary at night just before they go to bed, looking back at the events of the day gone by.
  2. Because diary entries are written just after an event, the end of each entry can have the writer looking forward to the following day, wondering what will happen, describing how they hope things will turn out and possibly fearing the worst.
  3. Focus on your feelings, thoughts & opinions. Be brutally honest, confide your most intimate secrets, things you wouldn’t even admit to your best friend. Hold nothing back.
  4. Slang is appropriate here. This is one of the only times that you are expected to write as you speak. Therefore you can curse (but don’t overdo it!). Short snappy sentences work well.
  5. Making a statement and then changing your mind will create a sense of immediacy for the reader (never do this when making a speech or writing an article) as if you are pouring your thoughts out onto the page without even thinking them through fully.
  6. Witty observations, sarcastic remarks and self-mockery will keep the reader entertained.
  7. Choose a significant event /situation not a typical boring day where nothing much happens.
  8. Persona? You may be asked to pretend you are a character from one of the texts. If so make sure you reveal their personality (not your own) in the diary. If you are given the choice of being anyone you want, choose someone interesting or unusual – Hitler, God, Sylvia Plath.
  9. If asked to write a series of diary entries write 3 or 4. These can be dated consecutively (Mon / Tues / Weds) or can be spaced out (Mon / Thurs / Sat).
  10. Real life diary entries deal with unrelated events – a car crash Monday, an argument Thursday & a hangover Sunday but fictional diary entries are different. The reader wants a sense of unity & closure. For this reason, entry one should introduce an issue, entry two should develop & complicate it, entry three should reveal how it was resolved.

Diary v’s Blog?

The word ‘blog’ is short for ‘web log’. There are two main types of blog

  1. discusses a particular subject.
  2. a personal online diary.

Blogs are

  • maintained by an individual or a company
  • regularly updated
  • interactive, allowing visitors to leave comments

As of Feb 2011 there were 156 million public blogs in existence.

The language used tends to be fairly informal.

If you are asked to write a blog about a personal event(s) in your life write it in diary style.

If you are asked to write a blog about a particular topic write it in the style of an article.

This diary entry task is adapted from the 2009 diary entry task, about being given a dog for your birthday. My students had to include the following:

-explain that you have been given a chihuahua for your birthday and say how you feel

-describe how the chihuahua reacted when it saw you first

-say what you have to do to look after the dog

-say how you think your friends will react when they learn you have a chihuahua

Querido diario:

Estoy escribiendo estas líneas antes de acostarme. Hoy es mi cumpleaños y tuve una gran fiesta con todos mis amigos y mi familia. Para mi cumpleaños mis padres me dieron un cachorro y es un Chihuahua. El cachorro es muy pequeño y muy suave. Lo llamé Pepe.

Cuando vi el perro por primera vez, me sentí muy alegre y emocionada. Nunca he tenido una mascota antes. Cuando el perro me vio, meneó la cola, me saltó encima y ladró.

Compré comida especial para mi cachorro y he empezado a sacar mi perro de paseo cada día.

Por último, cuando mis amigos vean mi cachorro pensarán que es mono y querrán jugar con él. Me encanta mi cachorro; el Chihuahua y ¡es el mejor regalo del mundo!

Eso es todo, buenas noches.

 

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